Final Edit: Chloe A Morgan :) (film)


This is my final edit of my film. I cut out a lot, but I think it still makes sense...
that a girl is being stalked by a pyhsco lover..... :)

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These are my 10 shot stills of my film sort of in order! I wanted to use the credits as props because I thought that not many people use credits like that - they usually do it computerised. I wanted to be different and I think I achieved that.... :)

This is a word cloud where the most common words come up. We went to the site: http://www.wordle.com/.

This is an interesting way of doing it, because it makes it more funky. This is one of the feedback I got from my class..

Some of the other feedback I got was:

  • 'I really liked it'.
  • 'I found it funny how your name kept coming up!'
  • 'I thought it was cute how you put your cat in!' 'I can't believe you did it yourself!'
  • 'I liked how you used the light - it works good'.
  • 'I didn't understand how the title fit in with the film...'
  • 'I understood why you put'Broken Chain' as your title!'
  • 'I really liked how you used the credits! No-one did that and it was really different'.
  • 'Cool'.
  • 'It was different'.
  • 'We thought that the sound was good, but it jumped one point'.
  • 'It was real unique!'

(these qoutes are from other AS Media students. instead of filming them , I jotted everything they said, and typed it.. ;>)

Feedback

1) Mise en scene was particularly good with the setting and props
2) The camerawork was mostly good, but the running sections were a bit too jagged and nauseating.
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4) It sort of reminded us of the Blair Witch Project.
5) The audience would be people that are interested in supernatural happenings and are aged 18 or above.
6) Supernatural, dark, ominous, different, dangerous

This was written by group 14 and said about our opening title sequence.
My favourite part was how they said it's like the Blair Witch Project because in a way it was what our group was aiming for.


'The Reading' is a trailer that me and my group members Lydia Alldritt and Reem Emary produced. We chose our production company to be 'Candi Studios' which clearly isn't one of the Big Six. This makes it clear that our film is a low budget film.

An example of a film from the Big six could be 'Mission Impossible'.





Mission Impossible 3 (also known as M:I:III) was an Action / Thriller film made by One of the Big Sixes - Paramount. The film stars Tom Cruise (Ethan Hunt) as the main character of all series!

The reason why me and my group never chose to star anyone famous and choose a production from the big six is because it would have been very hard to find extreme settings, locations and the mise en scene. We didn't want to risk a failure therefore chose to use 'Candi Studios' for our production.

For our Directors and all the information about who produced the title sequence, we wrote down our own names and chose to put a made up name in for one of the starring as we didn't want to use our names twice. We didn't give any famous / important names for any of these because it wouldn't be realistic.
We included the Production company, Starring, Director, Producer and Music. We deliberately chose not do go into things like 'Costume design', 'Hair and Make-up' etc because we wanted to keep it simple so the audience could concentrate on the actual trailer such as locations and mise en scene and the actual scenario rather than all the detailed made for the trailer.

We wasn't really inspired by any movies made in the past, we wanted to plan something different! However something similar with Mission Impossible and our trailer, just as similar as it is to many other trailer is the fact that we chose to explain the storyline a bit instead of keeping it as just showing the location or not having a meaning or idea to what the film could be about. We wanted to explain what the film roughly is about. Mission Impossibles trailer also does the same as they give away some of the things that will be happening in the film.

Both our trailer and Mission Impossibles trailer introduces the main characters of the film in the trailer into what they are like in the film. Meaning not only showing their faces but bringing forward their character. Such as the audience of our trailer could clearly tell that their is a main character that's a fortune teller , similarly we are aware that Tom Cruise is a character full of action!

Our trailer gives away the main settings of the film which is in a forest surrounded with trees and a fortune tellers room. Similarly, Mission impossible gives away the settings and locations. Although M:I:3's trailer is mainly based on the roads, we can see this as the trailer tells a lot about the film being an action thriller and the audience could tell that a lot is going to be based on roads!

Mission Impossibles theme tune has become a general and is a very powerful orchestral, differently our theme music is instrumental made on SoundTrackPro.
Mission Impossibles trailer has a lot of dialogue as well as just sound affects and the theme music, however our trailer is just a theme music. This is because we chose and decided together to have no dialogue as it can give away and spoil the trailer.


This is a print screen of a picture from wordle.net, where the words used the most are the biggest. I pasted in the comments from the other groups of our trailer, and I think it looks nice. My favourite comment in particular was when one group said it reminded them of the Blair Witch Project, as that film is very scary and would mean ours is too.

This is a video my group made showing the feedback we got from our class about our film, including our teacher's comments.


These words are a mixture of the feedbacks me and my group got from four other groups within our class.
I went on http://www.wordle.net/ and created a word cloud and the words that come up the most and the largest writings!
Some of the feedback words that came up the most was good, camera work, supernatural and film. These gives a quick idea that the audience had a great idea of what we aimed for!

This is a video i put together for our audience feedback, after watching all the trailers at the cinema. We edited it on final cut pro.